近几年,非常火的一个概念叫做"大数据"。确实,这是一个数据为王的时代,任何信息一旦通过数据来表现,就显得可信而客观了。考生在考场作文的过程中,可以援引一些数字来证明观点和看法。当然,前提是,这个数据本身是合理可信的,而不是信口开河,超越逻辑和人类想象的极限的。
Statistics released on certain academic journals have shown that 78% of teenagers have their own role models in China.
发布在某个学术性期刊上的统计数据显示,在中国,78%的青少年都有自己的偶像。
Surveys conducted by certain career-related websites have shown that roughly 98% of white-collar workers are more inclined to work with colleagues they trust. They hold that with mutual-trust they can finish the work more smoothly and efficiently.
由某个职业相关的网站展开的调查已经显示,将近98%的白领员工更倾向于与自己信任的同事共事。他们认为,有了彼此的信任,他们可以更加顺利和高效地完成工作。
Studies conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Science have shown that 78% of people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.
由中国社科院进行的研究已经显示,78%的养宠物(比如狗,猫等)的人更有可能获得幸福感,减轻孤独感。
There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate, roughly by an annual average of 12 %, in China.
很多证据证明了中国吸烟人口的数量以惊人的速度在增长,大概是每年12%。
结论:
以上我们通过五节,来具体讲解作文第二段"论述段"的写作论证手段,包括:意义阐述、对比论证、原因分析、弊端分析和举例论证。考生应该熟悉各种论证手段的使用题型、使用环境、模型结构等,考前进行大量的研读、模仿和背诵,争取在考场上可以灵活应用出来。作文的第二段,需要在论证手段这个大的框架和思路的引导下,用具体的文字内容将论据书写出来。